sirens (partial nudity)

[jimiyo]

i dont hang out here much, but

http://www.jimiyo.com/news_images/nu-sage4.jpg

you guys ever seen that Gerald Brom gothy reproduction of a waterhouse picture, im thinking i might take this image that way, if not just Mucha-ish.

i quit my ft job so i can pursue art, so i should be posting alot more once i get back from a road trip.

thanks for looking! ;)

[CaptainInsano]

love it

i am also going through a much phase.

[jimiyo]

thanks parker. ;)

http://www.jimiyo.com/news_images/nu_sage7.jpg

many cokes, many hours, cant wait to finish so i can get back to doing some pencils...

[sodomizer]

Hey man, good job i like it so far. The only things I'm not diggin to much is the thick outline around the figures... it flatten's them out badly, so... first things first... CUT 8><--- THE OUTLINE... lol.

You might want to add more contrast. The skin tones in some area's... because there's not enough shadows to really show us some volume. For example, this girl you got centered; Her knee's almost seem flat against her chest.

I'm getting a "sense" of your light source, but I'mnot "feeling" your light source, know what I mean? I think if you push it more, it'll solve all those contrast issues.

I look forward to seeing your progress! It looks really nice, and you've got a really great start with those value's. Keep it up, and stay consistant. gl!

[JokingClown]

this is a sweet picture. I personally would put some orange and yellow in the flame and the sun. the picture I think is a little too monotoned. The yellow orange on the flames i bring out the girls on either side skin color better. (I worded the badly). The orang in the sun wou highlight the middle girl, and the colors over all would bring out the scattered blood.

Wha sodomizer said about the flatness and outlines... It makes me think of vector art with those lines. I dont think thats necessarily bad though.