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Gun
April 19th, 2005, 09:51 PM
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y100/windykim114/ospraybw.jpg

DKyp
April 20th, 2005, 04:04 AM
I really like the concept and colors. Composition could use some work, as well as the figure.

Overall, very nice. You've got a cool imagination.

anty
April 20th, 2005, 06:19 AM
Cool, nice grey colored impression)

Danilo
April 20th, 2005, 06:41 AM
You should submit link to larger pic.
I think that stone on wich guy is sitting need to be lighter or something.

dogfood
April 20th, 2005, 06:49 AM
While each of the elements look pretty good, they do not mesh into one image. They look very like a compositional image, where each piece stands by itself, done in a different style and not meant to interact directly with any other. While the style is valid, this has such a shotgun composition, that it is a bit of a trial to figure out what we should be looking at, leading the eye to just jump around randomly. A good composition will lead the eye around (and there are may ways to do so).

Nice work on the figure, especially.

17sec
April 21st, 2005, 06:35 AM
details are briliant- and I much like smell of Bible's atmosphere. Wish could see larger this work :^^: