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MonkEE
March 8th, 2003, 04:05 AM
Fan art character for Ragnarok, The Assassin.
Aim at chibby style, but so hard to make clean accurate lines. Hands so shaky drawing with stylus, dont know how people do it.

Anyways. C&C away.
http://members.optusnet.com.au/hhuy2664/bin/assasin.jpg

Bai.
bbwolf
March 8th, 2003, 04:32 AM
What do you want? You even manage to vary the strength of the outlines. That very good.

But it looses something to the bottom. How about to redo the legs with a stronger outline? The only real problem seem to be the arms. Thereīs not enough deepth to the picture there.


Cool stuff. More.
MonkEE
March 8th, 2003, 06:29 AM
Fanx for reply.
What do you want?
Chibi style - japnanse lil short cute stuff. heh

yeah...
i did what you said about the legs, turn out alright.
but what do you mean by depth?
http://members.optusnet.com.au/hhuy2664/bin/assasin2.jpg
bbwolf
March 8th, 2003, 08:40 AM
Chibby style. Well, bet thatīs not yer first piece of work in that direction, eh?

The bolder outline work like charm if you ask me. Nice to the that you took this so well.

About the depth, hmh, how to put it.
The pose is similar to a defense position in an martial art form but itīs not working. (Reality shit, yīknow?) The arms, though no hands visible, look like theyīre very close to the torso. On one hand itīs flat looking. On the other hand itīs impractikel and not really good fighting prepare stand.
The colors are correct. The lineart is the problem there. Try to envision looking from a different, more sideways angle.

Uh...the two lines in the crotch...uh...


Carry on.
!Garden_Gnome!
March 8th, 2003, 11:26 AM
looks alot better now! i dont have much else to say