Jungle Fever 2

[Snowfly]

on a reconnaisance mission .. and they've just been found out.

http://home2.pacific.net.ph/~cmijares8/Hotspot.jpg

[kasai]

I like this. Though I got a little confused with the black and whites at first. Love the line weight on the inks.

kasai

[MonkEE]

Looks great,
nice style, the trees look good.



The chick's foot is kind of small?

[tyboogie]

i love the way you do figures. do you have a site or art dump where we could see more of your work? either way keep posting-

is that black streak at teh bottom supposed to be a bullet---if you hadnt told us they were ona recon and they just got caught i wouldnt have known

maybe they are going bird watching-ty

[Snowfly]

;) that's the fun of it i guess. maybe a word balloon or two would put everything into context. thanks!

[tyboogie]

no you DEFINITELY do not need any words--- if teh bullet was more readable --maybe its hitting the tree and some bark is chipping off-then we would know htey are getting shot at and are looking for something (recon)

no word balloons---ty

[Muttonhead]

Nice piece.

The guy looks like he is less concerned about what they are looking for and is more interested in the fact that this cute girl is straddling his head...hehe. This makes the piece somewhat humorous for me, and conveys less of a sense of urgency, but that may also have been your intention, in which case it works!

I also think that maybe her upper body is a little small compared to the size of her legs, but I could be wrong, anybody else have any thoughts about this?

-S.A.M.

[Snowfly]

lol you crack me up, mutton :D you're right on the money with the humorous thing. twas a fun, sexy piece i was trying to make (even if it is war), and the guy is talking to the girl, telling her that they've just been spotted. oh, and i agree about the offness of her proportions. but i kinda like it that way.
;)

ty: you're right, no excuses next time. just clear picture narrative. thanks man.