girl next door - on mars

[Clodhopper]

no reference, again.
http://www.angelfire.com/ut/clodhopper/redgal.JPG
I don't know if this is worthy of comments, but I don't know EXACTLY whats wrong with the anatomy, maybe yall could help?

[JoShuA]

First something good:
I like the color usage ,doesnt really make me think of mars though, more like hell. It makes me think of Lesbian she- devils that COOP! makes

Now a crit:
the face looks like it's sort of mishapen the right cheekbone is off and her hand is not very dynamic, I can appriciate the bowleggedness of her legs but perhaps theyre too Boyleggy

but I do like your style.