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brokencow
March 7th, 2003, 01:05 PM
http://www.brokencow.net/artbox/dream.jpg
This is a dream i keep having over and over again.
She's coming down the hall with these big long claws.
At some point they start scrapping the ground.
It's a cool dream and is welcome to come back again tonight.

The lighting on this one was a pain in the ass. I'm happy with how everthing looks, but it could be alot better.

C&C welcome, paintovers WELCOMED!

Thanks.
Cow

ChaosEidolon
March 7th, 2003, 01:23 PM
Weird dreams kick ass...

Nice concept and composition. It could be really cool if you finished it. I think the lighting is what makes the piece and what you have so far looks sweet. From the front though, cause shes getting little light, you lose her form and she kinda melts into the bg.

You already started doing that nice underlit lighting in her face, if you continued that on the bottom of the breasts, palm etc. just very very subtle, as if its refracting from the walls, youd be able to bring her shape out more without sacrificing the strong backlighting you have going on.

Atmospheria
March 7th, 2003, 02:50 PM
yea..make some lightning on the body too..not just on the face..then the body will pop out...
great piece

boehmke
March 7th, 2003, 03:44 PM
Looks like someone is reading a few to many X-Men comic books...or maybe you've seen the trailer to X2 recently.