Humanoid/Cyborg..

[garg]

I sketched this and just started coloring about half hour ago..

http://www.darkforum.com/gronk2copy.jpg

[garg]

oh.. and C&C requested :) thank you

[Gray]

great start!
But i think the whole image should be rotated a bit to the right. Then it looks moor balanced. The pose itself seems okay.

I guess you're gonna do the details later so I won't say there should be more details. Curious how it's gonna work out.

[nil]

i thinkthe legs are a little too small compared to the torso. nice start

[MolvaDo]

i agree with nil that the proportions are off. another thing I think you might want to drop the bottom part of the rib cage after the pectoral muscles it looks wrong for some reason. keep going and when you finish post it