Student In Study: Take A Look

[rasdasa]

Good day, I'm currently studying Animation and fine arts in Max The Mutt Animation, Toronto, Ont.
I'm hoping to get some experience over the summer doing some internship or contracting. Here is a link to some of my work:
http://img51.exs.cx/gal.php?g=oxchinserpent0gd.jpg

If you'd like to see more please feel free to contact me at BisVicTonics@rogers.com.
I am a vehement worker and am passionate about my art. My greatest asset, I believe, is my imagination, everything else has to constantly struggle to keep up*grin*.
Hopefully I can be granted a chance to do what I love and make some money while gaining some invaluable experience this summer.
If it can be done, I have no problem taking a 3-4 month hiatus to international locations for work. Hope you at least consider:


http://img129.exs.cx/img129/9586/thirdeyebgt2oi.jpg
http://img207.exs.cx/img207/98/unionized7fp.jpg

-Branko

[glikster]

That first pic has great rendering, but it's way too busy and confusing. I keep trying to find the closer character's head and I can't. the second pic is excellent proprtions but the leftmost collumn seems flat. I know that's how the light is falling, but it still looks flat to me.

[rasdasa]

hey, thanks gklister. I appreciate the concrete feedback. That's what I'm hoping to get more of this bloody summer!
Here, I'll change the first one if it's too confusing.