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[LeeSmith]

hey everyone, I could really do with some help on this one, it's very omportant to me. I game company I have been in touch with asked me to do some sample environment concepts and as I havn't done alot of this sort of stuff I would really like to know what some of you hardened veterans think :)

here's what I got so far, looking for any comments at all about whats good, whats bad, what I can do next, what I shouldn't have done etc. Anything and everything welcome! :)

http://www.shawawa.com/misc/comstation.jpg

thanks!

[permafrost]

Im not a hardened vet, but i still got some feedback for ya =)

I think that it looks good, its clean, the perspective looks right to me, and the lights are cool and blue.

What it needs is some proof of life, a forklift or two, crates, barrels, an exotic machine, whatever. Aslong as theres something that suggests to the wiever that there is, or has been life at the location.

Theres one thing on it i would change, its the cable that goes from the main building to the satelite disc, i would replace it with some metal pipes to give it a more solid feel.