First post!!

[mutzangs]

Hi! forks!

This is my very first post, so I would like as much feedback/critique as I can get. Thanks!

http://mutzangs.com/sources/html/sketch3/s01.jpg

http://mutzangs.com/sources/html/sketch2/s04.jpg

and Here's my website (http://mutzangs.com) ...

[ZippZopp]

you've got some really tight work here. just a few crits though

the first image: his head looks very very small, and the gun looks too big, the atmosphere is great though

image 2: very very cool painting, i'd only suggest that you get rid of those lens flares

keep up the good work

[Loga4]

Well,I like it...no crit.
Good jop.

[Manta_Ray]

Really nice work...the second one is great but I found the left hand part of the picture a little confusing. Is that rock or a tree? It sort of takes the focus away from the figures...dunno

[Groady]

I agree with Zip about the head and the gun. Still very nice, how long did they take you to do?

[mutzangs]

Thanks for the advice.

The first one took me about a day to do the whole thing.

The second one took me for a while....I think it took more than 3~4 days....and I paint 3~4 hours a day....

[Tristan]

Originally posted by ZippZopp


image 2: very very cool painting, i'd only suggest that you get rid of those lens flares

keep up the good work


oh yes those are in bad taste

[Ben Shore]

Nice work :)

I hate to jump on the bandwagon but I also think the lens flair should go. Even if Lens flairs weren't the bane of all overused CG fx, there's still the fact that in midevil times there wouldn't have been any photographic lenses around to create that effect... it really just doesn't fit.

[Ben Shore]

Opps I'd like to append the midevil comment since on further inspection they seem to be riding mechanical doohikies.

Still... the sense of the pieace is old-timey, even if it's a fantasy setting.

[KayCustomz]

its just good

[davi]

great pieces, it's nice to see someone that has fun with backgrounds!

[Severith]

Agree with Davi

Lots of great talent in them...