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ChaosEidolon
March 6th, 2003, 03:44 PM
Heres another image, one of the few sketches i can say ive really finished. I did this one last summer...so i already hate alot of stuff about it, in particular the shitty anatomy in the stomach area as well as some proportion issues.
But then i hardly ever like my stuff for more than a week...

The concept is the part i like so i think thats still valid.

please tell me what you guys think, and what you think would make it better/more interesting

http://www.boomspeed.com/chaoseidolon/sacconcpt.jpg

NRG
March 6th, 2003, 05:02 PM
Thats a cool peice of artwork. I particularly enjoy the flesh and muscles being pulled apart by those tiny mechanical arms. My only crit however, is that it appears his neck is slightly off center. If you moved the neck (and as a result, the head) slightly more to the right so that it sits centered above his pecs, it would be more accurate.

Just my 2 cents.

But otherwise, a neat drawing. Keep it up!
:smirk:

ChaosEidolon
March 20th, 2003, 07:02 PM
thanks for the crit

yeah...neck is off innit? hmm...

I think im gonna see what i can do to this baby in painter. It needs some atmosphere.

Crunch
March 21st, 2003, 12:17 AM
this idea kicks ass man! the concept is very solid and i even encourage you to re do it with what you have learned since.maybe you should have him on a table clamped down. and put a kick ass backround on it. just ideas keep it up man