I'm listening...Edit 2

[Frank the Ninja]

Tried for good proportion, simple style, and natural pose. Please C&C, thanks!

http://www.ninja.oceansend.com/boy1.jpg

[Su]

nice!....are you gonna put any detail to it?

keep posting mate! :^^:

[Frank the Ninja]

Thanks! Yes, I'm going to design clothes and stuff for him.

[dannE-B]

Proportionately it seems good, and yea its a nice simple and natural pose, maybe a little variation in the size of his upper thigh's.

[Frank the Ninja]

Thanks for the replies! Update:

http://www.ninja.oceansend.com/boy2.jpg

[Frank the Ninja]

http://www.ninja.oceansend.com/boy3.jpg

[dedguy]

something went horribly ary between the second and third skeches. you lost the shoulder muscels, the shape of the torso is now far too strait up and down and you can't see the muscels that lay on the back behind the shoulders and upper torso. the shape of the head is also far too square and the forarms have little to no definition, especially his left.

[Su]

keep at it!....you're doing well! :wink:

[Osmus]

in the first one it looks like you measured the body well. good job
looks like your stiffening up as you go down. stay loose, keep whispering, theres nothing to shout about in the sketch yet.