pink

[I.was.ink]

Just finished( its more than a sketch so I call it finished!) this nice little lady! :)

Inspired by one of Kevin Chen's gestures. Man that guy rules!
:D

http://www.joinedartists.com/gallery/sketches/pink1.jpg

http://www.joinedartists.com/gallery/sketches/pink2.jpg
For some reason she looks a lot sexier in this one. I think its cuz it leaves a lot to the imagination!

Problems I had were with the arm, not sure if its correct the way it is? I kind of like that unfinished look of the arms and feet, but I suppose it would look a lot better with them on. I'm just not sure how to paint them, since I made it up, based on Kevin's quick gesture.

Please give me crits, constructive ones of course and comments are always welcome!

O!

[R_M]

Hej I.was.Ink

I prefer the second one to, but I guess everyone here has a lively imagination!
the body proportins in the first one are a bit off, and I can't figure out if you did it on purpose or not. for ex. the legs feel a bit to thin.

On the plus side:
I like the shadows on the upper part of her back, and I really like the brightest of the tubes.

[weapon82]

The area you completed looks nice, but I think you left out too many important parts. She doesn't seem whole. The shadow on her back looks out of place. It's either too dark or too muddy. Nice job on the butt ;p

[I.was.ink]

Yeah I like her butt too. Yeah some stuff was sort of out of place. But whatever! :rolleyes:

Thanks fellas!

[jester]

Very nice work, but her lower left leg has a direction that disturbs the gesture in my opinion. It just turns the wrong way. Do you feel and see what I mean?

Jester

[OS2X]

I enjoy the your choices of color and the movement, in your pieces..

[I.was.ink]

thanks os2 and J! yeah i see it J, but i guess i got caught up in it and kinda forgot about it.