Explorers

[Erik]

Ok it's not completely done and finished but its not a sketch either - took my quite some time in fact. I still have trouble getting the edges nice and clean though...

Well, here goes: an attempt to do something more athmospheric. Critics very welcome!

http://www.xs4all.nl/~erikedf/art/wip/cave.JPG

Still hope to get better at this stuff...

[bbwolf]

I like how the colors change from yellow sunny sky into the deep blue of the cave. Looks almost like they explore each other. Alien explorers meets modern day cavemen.

The composition is good but really could use those clean edges. Is this painter? Be couragous. Take a sharp edged brush and give it a try.
:thumb:

[soupface]

looks nice. maybe not posted in the right thread, at least, I hope not because you should finish this.

if they are 2 different sides, meeting at the mouth of this cave, make their equipment look different, or at least glow different colours. i dunno.

[Erik]

Well, i have tried to make it somewhat more finished (shame on me for using the thread for WIP... i know...) thanks for the critics anyway. Still struggling with the painter brush, i created one myself now but i'm still not very happy with the result.

So now i'll post an update. The idea was that this team of explorers (all the same side) went into the cave to find some alien artifact or something. But it could have been two teams, not too clear picture i guess...

More finished: http://www.xs4all.nl/~erikedf/art/wip/cave2.JPG

Critics welcome!

[KayCustomz]

crappy colors make it perfect enviroment, did i spell it right?

[Erik]

T h a n x KayCustomz, I guess... ;-)

Still hope to get better...