CLOWNS versus NINJAS!!!!

[kong]

CLOWNS versus NINJAS!!!!
http://kong.5u.com/images/sketches/april1/ninjavsclown.gif

[Lauren Short]

:ninja: :ninja: :av: :as: :clown: :clown: :a!:

hahaha nice concept :P


fun stuff :teeth:

[Tully]

I think the composition could be better thought out. There's a nice mix of horizontal/verticle lines, but I think there could be more focus to it. Where am I supposed to look first?

Because there's very little focus, my eyes are drawn directly to the thighs of the top right clown. They look like pepper-shaker penises, I'm afraid. Though not really anatomically incorrect within your style, that's just what sprang to mind at first.

[Darrell Bowman]

i dont think you need the two big heads in the forground
their taking up prime realiste i think that area would be better
used to show two full figures. if you had not said ninjas vs clowns
would we have got it and i think yes if the forground was two main
figures the top is good. looking alittle like all the same size thou.

but drawing of figures is excellent.

[JWSamsara]

It'd be funny if you gave the clowns rubber chickens and balloon poodles to fight with instead of glaives and daggers, imho :P

[Shino]

My money is on the Clowns... Ninjas just rarely if ever prevail in movies. I just can't trust a bet on them anymore.