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NRG
March 4th, 2003, 08:24 PM
Ok.. This is my first actual art posting. I'm basically looking for some comments and/or criticism. I drew her and scanned the image, then coloured it in photoshop.

By the way.. I would also like to mention that I think this site, as well as all the artists who use it, are great! I enjoy shifting through the numerous quality posts and reading the feedback. Keep it up! Hopefully this post runs smoothly.

http://www.members.aol.com/pixellancer2/prisoner_of_light.bmp

(P.S This .bmp file is 873 kb (pretty slow for us dial-up folk).
So if your connection is slow, please be patient. Good things come to those who wait (hopefully). :smirk:

Theo
March 4th, 2003, 08:39 PM
Ohh like the curves man. the shading is tasty too:)

One small crit would be the inxesistant shading of the forehead though. The top part of the face looks a little flat compaired to those lickable leggs of hers...

bsides that its great, love the glow of the hair and the planet in the backrop.

:chug: Good goin:)

-Theo

Darrell Bowman
March 5th, 2003, 12:37 AM
Nice and clean work.
i like the airbrushing touch you have.

boehmke
March 5th, 2003, 12:49 AM
You have a wonderful tuxture on the pillar and bench that the girl is on. I think you need some of that energy and detail in the rendering of the lady. Plus the light reflecting on the left side of her body should be seen on the rest of the objects around her.

Great first post!

boehmke
:clapping1

Gorbay
March 5th, 2003, 05:59 AM
man , please make it png at least...