Heavy ATV

[Theo]

This heavy bastard was made with good old copic pens, scanned, and given orange lights with photoshop.

I'd love some crits, primarily on the concept itself. The actual render can obviousely be improved:)

http://194.236.60.59/Tejodor/hatv2.jpg

thanks, :chug: , beer for all!

Theo

[mtw]

Are you trying to make a vehicle that could be used for offroading? If so, you might want to remove those things from in front of the wheels. It would have a hard time climbing over steep rocks otherwise.

[Theo]

heh I forgot to mention, I know it wont work in heavy terrain. ATV is merely a cool name:)

Such feedback is nice, yet obvious, thanks though;)

[Yaseck]

I'd love to have such a car.

[Fisa]

designwise i think it looks great. you could use the excuse that the front gaurd is on a hydraulic suspension so it would still work offroad ;)

drawingwise the perspective is a bit off in the wheels, but considering you did them freehand is a great attempt. i find that if i keep the tires (rubber part) more loose in my drawings you can shrug off having to get those super correct. besides with an offroad vehicle tires are suppose to be chunky and messy anyway.

renderingwise, the only thing i would add is a definitive 1-2-3 side read. your lightsource is obvious because your core has a highlight. you just need to decide whether the front or the side of the ATV is the shadow side on your vehicle and darken it.

[Theo]

Yaseck: me too.. man if I had one.. the fun I'd have...

Fisa:

Thanks for the feedback man, thats real feedback for once:) I checked out your website, and dude, its an honor. I really like your heavy buggy and the "deliverer" .. heavy swat stuff there man. Its exactly the kind of art I hope to be skilled at one day:) Automotive/spaceship design... its all a man needs ... some poontang and a couple o beers beside that and youre set for life.

Thanks for the rendering advice too.. I'll keep that in mind for my next... warbeast:)

:chug:

-Theo