coal city- character designs

[Sybo]

Well, I've just joined here, but have been examining these forums for almost a year.
Anyways, heres my quick sketches on a comic, book, thing im working on(well, mucking around with i mean).

http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y62/sybo13/antonion.jpg

http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y62/sybo13/lent.jpg

thanks for any comments.....please may i have?
They're brothers by the way.

[sodomizer]

I'd like to see some more of these sketches finalized before giving you a proper critique. I can go on about anatomy, and all this other crap, but that wouldn't be fair since these are too rough. I like the character poses, they seem nice, and the designs seem ok.

Give us something more finalized and i'm sure you'll see some more C&C's from people. GL.

[Sybo]

Will finalise them soon i guess. They were pretty quick.
I guess I needa get a little more original with the costumes, and the anatomy is wobly. THNX nyways

[jfwalls]

You should really try to post stuff with a more finished look. These are so sketchy that there's really not even anything worth pointing out yet.