some paintings

[akrep]

Hi everyone,

Here are some latest paintings from me.

http://www.dreamdunya.com/images/gallery/digitals/delikosan.jpg

http://www.dreamdunya.com/images/gallery/digitals/lord_of_the_sadness.jpg

http://www.dreamdunya.com/images/gallery/digitals/efe.jpg

http://www.dreamdunya.com/images/gallery/digitals/nefret.jpg

Hope you like them...

[ApolloNuevo]

some very nice stuff here. one suggestion on the last one w/ the red. perhaps play w/ the flame lines from his hand and having some come out towards the viewer. variety w/in repetition plus it would give us some more depth.

technically these are all well rendered. you could work on your compositions and story telling a little more though.

[dogfood]

These are well rendered with a nice sense of lighting and color, but your tendency is to draw people with tragically short torsos (especially the first one). There's not enough room for the kidneys, much less the miles of intestine.

[Odds]

like everyone else said, these are nice, but they need a little bit of work. first of all, i think you should work on your composition. look it up on google.com "composition". learn how the viewer's eyes catch things and what makes things stand out. in most of your pictures there really aren't values of 1-2 (being that 1 is darkest and 5 is lightest). i think your pictures need more contrast to make a focal point. keep up the good work, though. :)

[schowalye]

fine renderings...
i agree with the critic about torso.
Waiting for others...

[akrep]

Thank you all for your constructive comments.
These works are to improve myself. I'm trying to keep on it :)