VooDoo women...

[Molly]

Ok, dont usually post in here, BUT I expect a few crit-oo-ramas offa you fellas, so, constructive crits paaa-leeeease!
A doodle I did with no ref, and thought to add color, cos, well, why not?
A piece for me and my growth as an artist..

Sketch, I got a crit Mr Steak-Tron, bout the highlights on her head(taa my sweet...;))
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v57/Tekura/Voodoo_women_lores.jpg

1st color:
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v57/Tekura/Voodoo_women3_lr.jpg
struggling to define another source of light for the right side of the pic...

2nd pic WIP:
Here I added a neon sign in the background which, (if read in full) would say VooDoo:
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v57/Tekura/Voodoo_women4_lr.jpg
Also, one problemo, the screen Im workin on is a bit naff, so that may contribute to any poor color quality goin on here, (if theres any) but lemme know...

I got a crit from the lovely ExeCute, and she says to add some trinkets, braclets etc to add to the movement, which, I shall go back and do, as its so true....Crits on color, lighting, and movement please!

Luv yers

Mollyx

[stoph]

very beautiful :) the only thing im having a little prob with is the girls top - it isnt sitting right on her back, which in itself isnt curving enough for the pose shes in. her upper half is twisted quite considerably, which is ok but it doesnt sit right with the rest of the back. other than that i love it! well done (sorry, no colour crits at the moment im in a rush)

[cuzzo]

cool... her chin looks a little off though

[dogfood]

Great line quality, Molly. One of my favorite elements is the single strand of hair that fell on the scanner :tihi:
While most of the anatomy seems smack-on, the back is giving me fits. The right side should have a lot more scapula digging into the spine and perhaps even some bulge from the back-side of the deltoid. Her left wrist seems a tad wonky, as if she had a very short palm or... well, something strange is going on. I'm also not too sure that her whole left arm isn't too short. Try that part of the pose and see where your elbow goes. Mine goes much further (being an orangutan).

Love the stomach bulge. And the right hand reminds me of a master's drawing.

Sweet.