I'm newbie ~ Hi.

[narm]

Hello all~

I'm really amazed many works in CA.
so I want some critic on my work too.

let see~

A shot-of-money assassin
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v319/nahm/asspost1.jpg
but he is too good looking

so I sketch no.2
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v319/nahm/asspost2.jpg

...and a crazy submarine robot
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v319/nahm/robot3.jpg

I'm lacking skill of choosing color
so if someone can help me about painting metal or robot ,please comment me

thank you ^_^

edit*
adding some works from my illustration course
Henri Martise
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v319/nahm/matissergbflatten.jpg

reproduct of Vincent Van Gogh
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v319/nahm/goh.jpg

ps. Sorry for my poor English ~

[Main Loop]

not bad, i like the first 2, maybe some of the cleaner lines that your 3rd one has will help.. look at prometheusANJ's tutorials, they have a lot of great tips on painting surfaces..

[D1E HARD]

R these your concepts? Nice. Maybe you can give us some tip how u come up with..you can draw that's for sure.

[sercoe]

grrr... why does everyone who says they are a newbie draw infinitely better than me. :)

nice drawings. personally i like the first one the most.

[SirGreenSock]

I wouldn't call you a newbie, you've got a great grasp for dynamic poses and working in some perspective. The sketches could be neater though, but thats also part of your style.

[cateaic]

Yeah I would say that youre well on youre way to some very dynamic pieces! That robot guy youve half colored is cool! are you gonna finish him? I would change the head though...it just kinda ruins it for me. Youve got this badass robot with a square cartoon head? I wouldnt go to heavy with the blacks either...youre shapes will start looking too flat. Great posts!

[karma0zero]

first two are great, very dynamic and good foreshortening

[Fellah.]

Nice work. It would be really nice 2 see the finished version of the first two.
I love the idea of the silly cartoon head on a really cool robot - it made me laugh. However the feet might be a bit to small - wouldnt he just plain fall 2 the ground if he started running? The colors are nice.
But where is Picasso? Do a Picasso!

Fel

[narm]

To Fellah

my picasso was really bad
T_T

if you want to see

you may see


http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v319/nahm/pixasspflatten14.jpg

(somebody say this is not Picasso .thos is Harry Potter in polygon)


and this is Edvard Munch
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v319/nahm/munchflatten14.jpg

the rest are Andy Warhol and Marcel duchamp
I've problem about colour or IE so ican't upload them
(Can uploadbut can't see)

[Fellah.]

Hehe - the Picasso is not bad at all, however i am wondering why u made him look so scared - i mean this is the most hardcore artist that ever lived and even at the age he has in your portrait he knew that! Does he look like that in his own selfportrait? I cant remember.
Munch taking drugs and ending up looking like an insane Burt reynolds having nightmares about Dolly Parton, sick dude sick! Did u know that the Screampainting has been stolen and not returned yet?

Fel

[Fellah.]

Oh btw im newbie here 2
Check my sketchbook and other stuff and give me crits, please... ... .. .