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yellowworm
March 19th, 2005, 03:27 PM
http://www.withered1.com/WEBIMAGES/solost_web.jpg



and a couple other images...

http://www.withered1.com/WEBIMAGES/bigeyesdeadrabbit3_web2.jpg

http://www.withered1.com/WEBIMAGES/mother_web.jpg

http://www.withered1.com/WEBIMAGES/winner_web.jpg
Aly Fell
March 19th, 2005, 03:31 PM
I love your work so much! :D So now the Rabbit's dead, and been crucified, can we expect resurrection?
yellowworm
March 19th, 2005, 03:34 PM
i'm a fan of your work too.
:)

resurrection, hmmm....
depends on my girlfriend i guess. ;)
Pavel Sokov
March 19th, 2005, 03:40 PM
goddamn this is fucking brootal, i love it man
spyroteknik
March 19th, 2005, 05:22 PM
*drops in several beers, runs out*
yellowworm
March 19th, 2005, 05:32 PM
ha.
thanks spyro.
glad to know i'm helping to promote your alcoholism.
;)
cuzzo
March 19th, 2005, 06:20 PM
I like it too.

I like the subject matter...
dave finch
March 19th, 2005, 06:27 PM
wow, really, really cool stuff!
LaPalida
March 19th, 2005, 06:33 PM
Praise: Wow the bunny one was really disturbing. I didn't expect the ending to be so rough. Pretty emotional.

Crit: I don't like the bright blue. Doesn't fit at all. You should of kept it white.
Warhead82
March 19th, 2005, 08:57 PM
i love your work so much too, the first piece is outstanding! What did you do for this, mix traditional and digital media togehter?
RipperMcGuirl
March 19th, 2005, 10:27 PM
Jesus, the bunny painting his floor almost made me cry.
yellowworm
March 19th, 2005, 11:40 PM
Warhead82, thanks bro. yeah it's a mix of traditional and digital media. charcoal and pastel and then painter and photoshop.

LaPalida, on the blue tear...yeah, i have mixed feelings with it...i'll have to try a bold white tear and see how it turns out.

thanks for taking the time to post your comments...
:) it means a lot.
broken lizard
March 20th, 2005, 02:09 AM
these are pretty scary.
lotta controversy.
well, for the first, second and fourth one.
the_blur
March 20th, 2005, 02:40 AM
Awesome personal style. I like it a _lot_. Much better than the usual fare.
Very dramatic 1 pager there =) I like. The blue is out of place and I would do away with it entirely. Other than that, a beautiful, heartbreaking story (top-notch lettering too, you have a great hand).

That being said:

Corporate machine, nothing I haven't heard before, but good artwork nonetheless. Bad typography. This piece deserves more work on the type, yellow is not a great choice of color (why? cowardice? jaundice? Why an english typeface? Find an American one -- look up ). The type in "corporate superstar" is really terrible, I can't even tell what it is. You should have simply chosen 1 typeface and stuck to it, there's no reason for a poster to have more than 2 fonts used in it unless you're going for a particular effect (lasagna text). Try a Goudy serif type.

Edit: Forehead barcode is hamfisted. We get the idea. You can do without it.

Cheers
Federico Contreras
the_blur
natethegrate
March 20th, 2005, 03:11 AM
really cool, like the comic page. your b/w style is gorgous. the frontview right in her eyes is amazing... post more bw stuff

natE
yellowworm
March 20th, 2005, 06:58 AM
the Blur, yeah I probably went way over the top on Corporate SuperStar. the image has a funny story though. I did the initial work for the US Govt., for a program called HOPE (Helping Offenders Procure Employment) and then they canned it cuz the dude looked a little too...yellowWorm. lol. SOOOO....this spewed out. It's not a stand-alone piece. Just an obnoxious angsty reply. :teeth:

Thanks for the feedback.