Something is REALLY wrong!

[hariz_otaku87]

http://img45.exs.cx/img45/1991/drawing85dt.jpg

Ive notice the char's right leg is somewhat small, the shoes too and can somebody teach me how to draw hard-objects correctly, for example; sword, because Im suck at it, just look at the sword. Hmm, the jackets is somewhat 'rigid'. Can anybody help? Especially the leg ones.

p/s: dont mind the anime style

[dadamafia]

im not that big an anime fan but i will agree the feet are waaaaay too small. those legs look very stiff also.

[OLSEN]

can somebody teach me how to draw hard-objects correctly, for example; sword

The only way to learn how to draw "hard objects", is to practice drawing them. Google some references of swords or whatever you need, then make studies of the objects.. when you have made enough studies of an object, you will have learnt how the object looks and you will be able to draw it without using reference. It's the easist way to get it right...


...unless you got some swords at home of course, then draw them instead, it's almost always better to draw from life then from photos. :painting:

[EVIL]

the characters left leg is also way to long. I suggest doing some anatomy and proportion studies, just to get the stuff inside your head

[Prehistoric]

there's actually a lot wrong with this picture.

you've got different parts of the body in different perspectives. you've got a side view of the arms and head, but a somewhere between frontal and 3/4 view for the body and legs, and the spine is straight as a post.

the hands are too small for the arms, the feet are too small for the legs, and the legs are too large for the body.

study anatomy more, and try some life drawing.

[hariz_otaku87]

Hoho, thanks guys especially Prehistoric, now thats a real deep comment. I thought my anatomy skills is good enough though, must be my confusion about perspective.

I'll try to update asap.

[carrot chaser]

greetings,

have you considered putting yourself in the image 'freddy got fingered' style? there seems to be a lack of human essence? feel dont see? the distinction between being and imagination is a void.

farewells.

[hariz_otaku87]

What do you mean by 'freddy got fingered' style? I know Im still lacking in expressions, I'll try to improve on it. Thanks.

p/s: havent draw anything like 5 months now and feeling newbie-aliased.

[Sok N. Wett]

Hoho, thanks guys especially Prehistoric, now thats a real deep comment. I thought my anatomy skills is good enough though, must be my confusion about perspective.

I'll try to update asap.

Anatomy will never be good enough if you keep drawing in anime style, you gotta learn about the human body first before style. Cause right now your going to learn only mistakes, and if you copy other artist, you'll learn their mistakes. So fully learn anatomy, and you can go back to anime, then you'll have more indepth knowledge of how the body bends and works and even perspective. So keep drawing. :)