Fabrics help

[J Cae]

http://ca.geocities.com/elmabrettshard/sounil.jpg

This is almost done. Sorry about the watermark--but I've just made someone remove my art from their Deviantart page a couple days ago.

I'd appreciate any forms of comments, good or bad, especially regarding the fabrics of her clothes. I've been having a hard time trying to paint something that doesn't look like crap.

Thank you very much.

[glikster]

well... I'll be honest, it's on its way to being gorgeous, but I think you need to punch the values in the face up. It looks flat.

[J Cae]

Thanks for the comment. I'll work on it.

[L. Scott Knight]

Her nose look very thick. I suggest rounding the shading on the left side and swooping it up and over to the eye.