Moloch Monster and other recent schtuff

[Erik]

Here some stuff i recently did when i rediscovered sketchbooks.

http://www.conceptart.nl/artists/erik/artworks/gallery_sketchbook/moloch_800.jpg

http://www.conceptart.nl/artists/erik/artworks/gallery_sketchbook/malachin_bw.jpg

might have posted the next one already ....
http://www.conceptart.nl/artists/erik/artworks/gallery_sketchbook/glutton.jpg

Tell me what you think! all is unphotoshopped schtuff ;)

[Blue Sphere]

All your stuff looks awesome :bounce:

#1 It looks pretty cool, but it also seems like he's got four man-boobs. It seems they added another chest onto him.

#2 Same thing for #1 and how is his hair staying up like that if it is?

#3 If he's so large how does he sit like that? I've done it and sitting like that for too long hurts. Also maybe just me, but his arms look very small for his overall size.

Stuff looks great and the crits for #1 and #2 are just my personal thinkings inside my head not anything wrong with the pictures themselves.

[Erik]

Yeah right. Well thank you for the positive crit. I love you too.

[dogfood]

I'm surprised these have garnered more comments. I really like the color in the first and the body twist in the second (he must really go through the deodorant).

There might be a little too much negative space at the top of the first one and the head looks pretty small in comaprison to the hands in last.

Very nice.

[vcoleman]

oh yeah! nice man. feel'n the love of the sketchbook. number 2 is a fav.

[Icey]

wow... freaking great!!! love them!!!

[Lake]

cool stuff, I think that last one is the creepiest out of the three... but I might turn the second one into a monster for my dnd world.

[audioslavekane]

great work, btw... i assume the creatures have 4 pectoral muscles in order for the arms to work properly....you obviously have a firm grasp on anatomy and have great drawing skills, as for the prior criticisms you've recieved, the only point of "manboobs" i can see is that the nipples on the right pecs, (left side of page) on the first drawing look like they may be distended a bit to far, or pointing in the wrong direction, other than that, awesome work great highlight on first one too.

paul cadmus did a great series of "7 deadly sins" artwork, try and find them, he even added a few sins if i remember correctly, your work is very reminenscent of his. also the arms don't look to small on the third, gives the sense of stationary movement...like the only thing the figure mother to move is the food to it's face.
again great work.

[Erik]

thank you all ;) yes i can see your point with the exaggerated 2nd pec... true

Thanx for that link to the 7 sins! very nice to see that stuff

[NOOSE]

right on these are great! the first of course rocks!
the only crit is maybe on the 2nd his ear might be a tad far back ...or not
:)