Secretary Chick ((Updated!))

[Shogun]

First Post, :)

Anyaways, heres a drawing Im planning to put on my site, this is far from finished but I want to get as many ideas as possible, I want to make this look as nice as possible

crits & comments are very welcome

http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y31/ShogunXL/Secretarywip.jpg

[Elwell]

Her head is tiny and her neck is HUGE.

[Elwell]

Spent far too much time playing with this in Photoshop, should be working.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v480/Elwell/SecretaryPO.jpg

[Cookiedough]

Hi there,

First of all: where does this girl work, cos it doesn't seem like she'd work at an office.

Secondly: the update is looking better than the original already, but still has some anatomy mistakes. Her breasts are a bit too high up, the upperarm seems too short and the lower arm too long. Her hands don't seem to match either, her left hand seems a bit 'witchlike', while her right hand seems pretty normal. Her proportions overall are good.

In the future: try drawing a stickfigure first, roughly determining the proportions, before adding final lines to the picture. Also, try drawing the figure naked, before adding clothing. The folds and curves in the fabric will look a lot more natural then.

[Shogun]

Elwell: Thanks for the help, I looked at your photoshop update and I tried to fix some of the mistakes, didnt touch the face though, in your version it looks as though she has lost her confidence. Anyaws, I am very grateful for your help

Cookiedough: She does work in an office, but not dressed(undressed) like this :rendered:
Yes I should use stick figures more often, hmm... does the folds look that unnatural?

Ok heres an update of the drawing

http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y31/ShogunXL/secretary2.jpg

[Interceptor]

Everyone else has already commented on technical things, so, from a design standpoint, next time try drawing a girl like this in the clothes she'd normally wear. it's more more challenging and rewarding to make a natural looking girl in realistic clothes beautiful. It's very easy to make a girl sexy when she's in lingerie.