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BC1967
March 1st, 2003, 10:56 AM
Hi All,
This is a WIP. The formula ( I know ) is work from back to front. I'm following it for the most part, but, I can't help but jump around the piece to keep my attention level up.
So, the buildings in the background arn't more than roughed in. The middle ground is almost there, as is some of the foreground.


IMAGE HERE (http://rendermonitor.no-ip.com/forum/viewtopic.php?p=216#216)


:rolleyes:
sin
March 3rd, 2003, 10:53 AM
i likes it! finish finish finish!

good jorb
BC1967
March 4th, 2003, 10:08 PM
Thanks!
UPDATED IMAGE and DETAILS (http://rendermonitor.no-ip.com/forum/viewtopic.php?p=221#221)

More C&C, please sir.
TJ Verhagen
March 6th, 2003, 05:54 AM
Very nice work sofar.

I'd say work on the yellow backdrop buildings a bit more. I think the contrast is too great between the modeled (right?) pyramid-ish shapes and the foreground.

the smoke also looks not very realistic.. and I think the sky could use more hues and/or color variation.

kickass work tho, be sure to post your progress:D
BC1967
March 9th, 2003, 11:14 PM
Did some more on the city and have started in on the sky.
Comments?
:rolleyes:

IMAGE HERE (at bottom of the page) (http://rendermonitor.no-ip.com/forum/viewtopic.php?t=57)
tyboogie
March 10th, 2003, 04:34 PM
this si a great concept--i love te transport vehicles on the wires. having trouble loading the whole picture here and there.....

yea id like to see some slaves/ people in the foreground engaged in action. its looking great--i look forward to the finish--ty
R_M
March 11th, 2003, 02:05 AM
This is beutiful BC1967!
Wish I could give you any constructive crit, but don't know where to start...

I'd love to be able to render Backgrounds this nice...I tought that it was finished on the first post, but you keep adding details and depth to the thing, keep it up!
saturnfive
March 11th, 2003, 04:58 PM
That certainly is beautiful work BC1967. I'm making an Egyptian DM map for UT2k3 at the moment and it also has an orange sunset sky (pics on my site here (http://saturn.five.tripod.com))
soupface
March 11th, 2003, 08:34 PM
i really like it. it's not only a cool concept, but an excellent painting too. the details are so clean, esp in the foreground and vehicle, and the sky is shaping up well.

i'd change that bright red, scratchy stuff on the tall building on the far left - it looks wierd.

might want to add more contrast to the rocky-cliffs, esp in the right.

awesome work bc1967