cammy, rikku, babe and a cute beetle

[thek0n]

having some fun with cammy...

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v53/thek0n/0CammyGym.jpg

could be a cool costume for ff X-3... maybee not... but, I can still dream.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v53/thek0n/RikkuFF10-3.jpg

original character...some hot babe in a short skirt...

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v53/thek0n/MySexyGirl.jpg

last but not least, a mutant beetle for a game like Contra.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v53/thek0n/Monster01.jpg

[Soultek]

I like the middle one the best. The top one is a bit crazy on the highlights imo. I'm guessing you were going for a more comic book feel to it. Try to pick a light source in your works and add shadow and highlights based on that source point. The last image has potential to become a cool character. Good work so far, hope to see more from you in the future.

[thek0n]

thanx for the crit's. It's been a long time since I've posted something so there it is.

The first one....well I agree with the lighting, it has too much whites on her.

thanx again

[Evil_Sloth]

your forshortening is awesome! you just have to watch your values because the first girls arms look like that have been sqaushed into two sosauges :/
try looking at promethus's work and tutorials for some tips on that.
keep it up dude!

[0kelvin]

Get rid of the reflections on Cammy's outfit. For one, I don't know what kind of material would reflect that much, and two, they are all wrong. The reflection in the crotch is of the front of her toe, which is facing away. That's like standing with your back to a mirror and the reflection being of your face. You have the same problems with the reflections on her wrists and chest.

You're definitely overdoing the specular highlights. All your coloured characters look drenched in oil or made of a very shiny plastic. You'll want to tone that down a bit. Your linework is good, but your rendering needs to be worked on.


0kelvin

[darth massacre]

Dude I love the beetle...absolutely....you neeeeeeeed to color it.



I also like how you're very gutsy in trying out dynamic angles...just watch out on the foreshortening. Needs some tweaking here and there but I think you already know what I'm talking about.

[BlueMech]

On your upskirted girl, her legs look a little short and stubby. Your cammy's face is a like rounded and chubby, which makes her look waaay young. Like a 11 year with breasts. I love the third one and the beetle. I agree with whoever said you need to colour it.

[thek0n]

Thank you for the crits guys...
You definately got me on the reflection, I was too lazy to draw a toe. As for the whole "oil" look, well, I've had a lot of influence from two different artist that do that very often... I still have to find a way to make skin look good without looking dull. I colored these images on Fireworks........ugh.......with a mouse. :nohope:

more stuff...

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v53/thek0n/SomeGirl02.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v53/thek0n/SomeGirl01.jpg