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Lono
February 28th, 2003, 06:12 PM
something i did for fun the other day.

its a pencil drawing that i took into painter.

http://www.joshmartel.net/zachhall/ogre.jpg
even though its just a doodle crits are most wealcome.

-Lono

AmadorL
February 28th, 2003, 06:18 PM
I like this a lot. What software and tools did you use?

Atmospheria
February 28th, 2003, 06:25 PM
This is so cool...you've catch the expression well...congrats...
it's awesome...You should do some color on it i think

tarwater
February 28th, 2003, 06:31 PM
Damn. That is friggin' gnarley.:shocked:

cos
February 28th, 2003, 11:39 PM
Cool pic man, love the expression, and has a nice overall sketchyness I like in stuff aswell.

Only thing I think could be improved on is it seems quite flat right now, (thick outlines may also be adding to that). Some more overall lighting would probably help the solidness.

I did a quick 5min paint over to show you more along the lines of what I mean, tried not to over do the heavy lighting as not sure if you wanted it more subtle or not? Anyway, hope it's helpful!

Lono
March 1st, 2003, 12:07 AM
cos: Hey! thanks for taking the time to do a repaint man!
i love it! it's such an eye opener to see how another artist would handle the stuff ive worked with.
although i purposely tried not to take this partictular piece very far, seeing the way you handled it really took me in a new direction. i actually restricted myself to 3 tones on this piece for stylistic purposes. the pencil is the darks, the background color is the mids and i used one tone for all the highlights. but your right, it is a bit flat, i still could have pulled off a more 3d effect in that same value range.
i do have a problem with outlining everything. its a crutch of mine.
Thanks brudder!

AmadorL: thanks,, i started with pencil and paper then i took it into painter and rendered it.

Atmospheria: thanks a lot. its just a doodle so i doubt ill pick it back up,,,, but maby.. :)

tarwater: heh, thanks man.

Fozzybar
March 1st, 2003, 12:50 PM
Coolono, but i can se the outline of the head, so it looks like a mask...just soften the outline at the chin and cheeks a little...

davi
March 1st, 2003, 12:58 PM
awesome work, i really agree with cos' points. If i was a better artist i would have known what bothered me when i saw it first.

Loga4
March 1st, 2003, 05:11 PM
Wow,really nice Lono,his face exp is killer!
Of course,Cos make good touch.

cyclonaut
March 6th, 2003, 04:28 PM
EEEEEEEEEEEEhehehehehehehe
(laughs like giddy little girl)


Very nice! I like his knarled up chin and the fact you can still the the pencil shading, leaves a very cool effect.

Excellent stuff bro-han!


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