Some of my work...PUNK!

[AshenWraith]

Greetings from your resident N00b,

I got bored of just checking out the forums, so I thought I would post some of my work...

I'm in need of some hardcore crits...
:bash:

I would greatly appreciate any and all comments though (especially if you are a pro :D)...


http://home1.gte.net/res02ssq/assassin_00.jpg
"The deed is done...."


http://home1.gte.net/res02ssq/tks_00.jpg
:cool: Hmmm... you look familiar... :hothead:


http://home1.gte.net/res02ssq/evil_eye.jpg
This is why little girls shouldn't wander out at night...


http://home1.gte.net/res02ssq/L0Z_01.jpg
A sketch... because we all love sketches...:rolleyes: (some shadows painted and cleaned up in photoshop)

BTW, I'm probably like most people here, and would like to get PAID for doing artwork, so any extra info on that would be great (I work for [KRAFT]cheese sandwiches BTW).

That's all for now kiddies:chug:

see you in your nightmares... :evilbat:

[ODIN SIX]

Awesome and welcome !!!!!

The first one is just Badass!!!

The second one looks too Photoshopped and unfinished to me..

I like the way you cropped the 3rd one ,, nice look in the eye.

The last one ,, I think has some propective problems,,, it looks
slightly off.. I can't tell why becasue I am still learnin about it
myself...

Keep postin :chug:

[Yaseck]

Hardcore crits?
hmm..
First one: what is this thing in his hand? Where are his hands?
Second one: his jacket is made of dust. That's not good. What happened to his hair?
Third one: the eye is dirty (i mean, there's something in it, hairs?).
Last one: perspective on the table!

:-D Anyway, there's something good in it.

Welcome and keep posting.

[AshenWraith]

:p

Hey... there... these are some cool crits...

The hands are there, I actually drew it first, and then thought..."man, this guy would look cool w/some claws thingies". Then, I drew the claws over them on another layer. That's just how it came out... you can sort of see some gloved knuckles/fingers if you look close... btw, the claws are attached to the forearm part, not the top of the hand, so his left hand is twisted a bit w/the fingers towards you... His clothing is too dark and difficult to see... but I figured if he were an assassin and out at night, wouldn't that be... sorta the point...?

The 2nd has crappy hair, I'll fix that... and that dust, and photoshopyness came from some other people who complained that he didn't blend with background enough... perhaps I can clean it and detail it. Do you think that would help...?

3rd one... no, not hair in the eye... that's supposed to be like a shadow of the lashes...:P but perhaps I didn't do it right... I don't know... hehehe... lemme check my shadow mannual... if someone could post some eyes w/the shadow of the lashes or send me some references it would be greatly appreciated...

Hey, that table is the problem I think.. or more so the map, perhaps if the map was drawn different, then the table would appear to be angled right... is it all in the top texture of the table...?

lol, these emoticons are cool... :beer: yummy, root beer...

Till I fixorz some of it... or die trying... ;)