Swordwoman

[rakot]

Just a hot girl in a land of cold. :)

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v197/rakoth/paintings/swordwoman.jpg

Done in Photoshop CS and Painter 9.

[dadamafia]

thats really hot. would like to see you work more on defining her breast region. also i would like to see you mix the palette more. like the background doesnt blend well with her.

[Cookiedough]

i agree with dadamafia, she's beautiful, but a bit flat atm.

[Aly Fell]

Just a hot girl in a land of cold. :)


She ought to wrap up warm then, instead of frolicking around half naked! ;) It's looking really 'cool' atm, but check her right wrist. It goes a little thin and kind or reduces the strength there, and there is something a bit odd about the perspective on that arm. I think it might be because the curve on the glove is opposite to the curve on the cords just above it. And is the sword resting on her shoulders? If so it should be a fraction lower... She's great though! Is she a shaman?

[Icey]

i wish it could be a little migger...
the belly looks flat... and the brests apear as they wew completly sticked to the ribcage.... if you know what i mean...

the background and the colors tho are verry nice!!

[Clockwork]

I think you could place her more into the image by adding some blue to the figure.

All of that blue in the rest of the painting, the mountains, sky, take some of the radiosity into account and add some slight blue highlighting in key areas - my first to tackle would be along the back of the figure, where her side and hips/buttocks are in shadow, then go from there. A touch of blue on the flesh from her surroundings and I bet the whole form will turn beautifully.

[rakot]

Thanx for the comments, guys.