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Rosethorn
March 6th, 2005, 10:25 AM
;d So I up and started this picture ummm.... yesterday sometime and decided to try a new style of coloring on it ;o Anyway, I had Willow-Wisp crit it and she said that the shading looks a little muddy, and I could add some transparent purples to it to make it look better ;o She said ya'll would probably be better at explaining it to me though ^^ So now I post it for you all to comment and crit about. Though it doesnt have to be about the colorin ;o I could also use some help on which lines should disappear ;d

http://www.rosevinestudios.us/ashesnkalua.jpg

Thank ya kindly everyone! ^^

Edit: I finished the colors ;o Though if there's any shading things I can still do it. Right now I'm more curious about if I should put a background on it or not x.x Also....I know some of the lines are kind of annoyin ;x But I cant quite pick out which one's to do something to and what do do about them x.x Like the girl's hair lines. I've changed their color a couple times and stuff ;x Anyway, any suggestions would be much appreciated! ^.^

haribubba
March 6th, 2005, 03:13 PM
i like the coloring so far, the only crit i have is the the tips of the noses seem a bit crooked

Rosethorn
March 6th, 2005, 04:11 PM
"the only crit i have is the the tips of the noses seem a bit crooked"
Thanks Haribubba ;o I hadnt noticed that...I think I got it fixed though ;3