A-whaddya-call-it

[TheJack]

http://img69.exs.cx/img69/6118/poser0bf.jpg

I know its not anything special, I mean after looking at all the amazing paintings in here, I actually feel like a hack. Oh well.

Hope I posted this in the right forum atleast. Well, opinions?

Edit: Problem with the picture...

[yousir]

i know how you feel. the stuff here is too good, sometimes.

i think you'd do well with a more neutral background color. in fact, all the colors could stand to be a little less saturated. maybe vary the lineweight here an there as well.

if its done, this is the right forum. if you're still working on it post in 'sketches/ works in progress'
the pose is good. :^^:

[TheJack]

i think you'd do well with a more neutral background color. in fact, all the colors could stand to be a little less saturated. maybe vary the lineweight here an there as well.


Yeah, the skirts coloring is just butt-ugly and the other colors are very simple aswell. But I'll try and work on that.


if its done, this is the right forum. if you're still working on it post in 'sketches/ works in progress'
the pose is good. :^^:


Well, it was finished when I posted it here, but now I feel the need to fix it. I'll continue that at the other forum then.

Oh, and thanks very much.