A bit too sketchy

[Produkt]

well im new here just looking for a bit of help

now i do alot of quick scetch ideas and well most of my work has alot of quick shot back and forth lines.

one of my quick 1 min examples

http://www.half-there.uni.cc/uploaded/combinejeep.jpg

(yes i like half-life 2)

does any one have any tips on how i can learn how to make smoother lines? like a drawing technequee

[Main Loop]

do a lot of contour drawing, and draw through objects, instead of stopping at where lines intersect..

[Xaya]

Relating to your thread name "a bit too sketchy"
i just can ask you: what do you want get in 1 min?
A super rendered finished piece? :er:

No, i think that sketch i quite accurate in perspective
for the line work, if you want to get it smooth you probably have to work with a pencil first doing the sketch very softly, then you can do it with marker.... (it is a real sketch isn´t it?)
(i think you are not able to draw the ellipses correctly at once so i would suggested you to do it this way... well i am not)

nevetheless it is all a matter of training...

-xaya

[Produkt]

Thanks for the enlightenmen :D