Springtime Love

[Bakanekonei]

I did this for a contest, what do youy guys think? i am asking for a full on critique. just be polite.

(clicky on the thumb)
http://img1.imagevenue.com/loc286/th_da6_lover_forum.jpg (http://img1.imagevenue.com/img.php?loc=loc286&image=da6_lover_forum.jpg)

[Chяis]

Awesome work man. No negative critiques at all it's a great work of art.

[HEROIC]

AWSOME WORK dude.

Really cool lightings
My Fav style, Fantacy<3. do more of these and gimme some more heart attacks. >:D

i think, the hands are a little bit big, which is okay, really cool man,

ALi, :^^:

[Sim]

Overall I think you've done a great job with this. There are two areas that could use improvement...First, the characters seem to be looking slightly (albeit very slightly) past each other instead of directly into each other's eyes. Second, while the flower is very sensitvely done and that's nice, for me the low contrast between it an the background is causing it to lose it's effectiveness as an interest point.

[Teknoholic]

That is tiny and retarded

[aprat]

That is tiny and retarded

Click on the picture.

[Pavel Sokov]

lol teknoholic u are a geniouse.

that pic gives us a great sun-like feel.. awesome, seems hot in there

[Bakanekonei]

That is tiny and retarded
you are also tiny and seemingly retarded lol.

[Kazz]

It may help to control your saturation levels, you can use saturated areas where you want people to focus, and desaturate the background. Things in the distance will become more desaturated as well. Keep it up!

-Kazz

[Mallack]

desire, timing, and location are the only real talents.
um yeah timing not a strong point i guess

but about the art which is why im here is very soft and thats not a bad thing but you may want to work on texture of some things (wings) the males seem to be of the same texture as his hair where as thefemales has more detail to actual structure of a wing but can use tuns of improvements if you take a look at anatomy you can get a good sence of how things relate. You have a sence of structure on human perspective but work on anatomy of an animal if you want to draw awing look at a bird. I realy enjoy the colors and again very soft good look for fantacy but bring more depth with darkness


p.s.cute signature

[Bakanekonei]

You have a sence of structure on human perspective but work on anatomy of an animal if you want to draw awing look at a bird. I realy enjoy the colors and again very soft good look for fantacy but bring more depth with darkness


p.s.cute signature
okay, but i didn't want their wings to look like a bird's....but thin and frail like a bugs.
and no offense but i think kazz's solution for adding depth would have worked with what i was going for....i needed some stronger shadows but i really don't want any colours in the pic any darker than they are.

[Mead]

Whoa, you've done very well.

[SIggE]

hmm
great work, but theres something about both the mouths and you should put some more work into the sword (make it more 3d,looks to flat)

[cas]

nice image.

something you could work on are the shadows to give it some depth - especially with such a strong light source.

:)