undead Vengeance

[Eliseu Gouveia]

Action/horror comic I´m working on:

Meet Jenna.
She´ll be having you for dinner.

Literally.

http://www.etherlair.com/gallery/publications////FOLDER_405f7ba2a6050/images/IMAGE_4214e5dc6739e.jpg

[Soultek]

The body looks good and the coloring style seems pretty tight. My only problem with this piece is something about the arms. For some reason they seem to be to long.. i think that is mainly becuase the hands are cut off at the edges wich causes my eye to think they go on forever. Perhaps next time do not cut off the hands and see how that works out. I could be wrong, but that's just how i see it atm.

[DaddyQBall]

Maybe put her between two pillars or curtains. Have her arms wrapping around them. It might even make her look more sensual.

[adevejian]

I like how you created the light source from below casting the light on her face like that I think thats nice. Also like how her costume is swirling all around.. I would play more with this... move her back in Z space and make a crazy swirling mess of fabric around her... but that's just a personal preference :wink: