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firechild
February 24th, 2003, 05:35 PM
Hi guys,
this was for a wrap around comic book cover (the front would have been the right hand half, left hand on the back). Unfortunately the cover was canned....alas....so it will never be colored unless any of you guys want to color it and post it in this thread. Crits and comments are welcome...

http://www.eddwerks.co.uk/combook_COVER2.jpg
joss
February 25th, 2003, 09:00 AM
nice clean line work you got going there, yeah it would be nice to seea color version.
on the crit front I'd say I like the girls on the left (back cover??), they look sort of cool cyberpunk (William Gibson type)chics, but I don't really like the girl shooting.Her face ain't dynamic enough (too bland an expression) and her right leg just seems too rigidly straight. The bots are okay in a retro type way, maybe a little cute compared to the girls ripping them to bits. There's nothing here that I ain't seen before, but I guess that's comics for you!
I like the horny hat!
come on guys, anyone else think this piece deserves a few replies/crits?:evilbat:
OS2X
February 25th, 2003, 10:20 PM
I like to see it colored as well. My only suggestion would be to add more line weights. in your inking.
Vader
February 28th, 2003, 09:21 AM
Hey i,m desginng a cover for a novel for my art exam at the moment so this is pretty cool inspiration. I like the line work most and that theres alot going on in the image.:)
spline
February 28th, 2003, 09:45 AM
Well I think its looks good. Nice work! The only thing thing that bothers me is that the girl on the front doesn´t look at what she is shooting at. If she did the image would have looked even better.
firechild
February 28th, 2003, 03:07 PM
I agree with your points entirely guys.
JOSS and SPLINE - I agree that the girl on the right needs to face her target and get a bit more expressive...I'll redo the face.
0S2X -yeah, line weights could be more contrasty...damn, thanks.
Vader - cheers, hope the cover looks cool, post it up in this forum maybe?

guys, anyone...can you color this cover,as I'd dearly like to see it in techni-color glory, and post it in this thread....plzzz.
Yaseck
February 28th, 2003, 07:36 PM
I think it's to detailed. :googley:
But the line-art is very good.