Shoggoth Attack

[nephilim]

didn this for a test piece for a RPG company. What do you all think? im looking for some heavy crits.

http://onfinite.com/libraries/333111/3db.jpg


Mike

[nicolas]

Hey Mike, well lets see....first off I would say you need a focal point in this piece. When I first looked at it, I didn't know what to look at, my eye was wandering around nervously. You have to figure out what the important part of this illustration is and how you can emphazise it.
secondly, It looks unfinished, by that I mean, the rendering is fairly rough, and alot of places look "out of focus". crisp it up a little.

hope that helped, keep 'em coming!

[nephilim]

yeah youre right nicolas, in most of my images i struggle with the focal point issue, its especially tough in pictures like this when i want to show a bunch of things at once. Solo character shots are much easier!! youre right about the blurriness of the image too. I rushed it and it is certainly evident!!

thanks

Mike