critics plz

[cityhunter]

http://www.kkdesign.idv.tw/images/Ling.jpg
i have just started learning to draw and color digitally. Please give me some advices as i really want to improve! Also can u guys tell me how to draw clean lines in photoshop?

[nafa]

The grass is not working. Looks like the girl has hairy arms.

[cityhunter]

Thanks for ur critic. i will start to draw more from now on but I am not patient enough to go into so much detail in a pic, i think really need to work on that...

http://www.kkdesign.idv.tw/images/honey.jpghttp://www.kkdesign.idv.tw/images/sketch.gif http://www.kkdesign.idv.tw/images/twoGirls.gif :nohope: