Some Life Drawings

[Moonsabie]

Some life drawings realy fast stuff i did So. year

http://www.darkenbane.com/image/55487.jpg

http://www.darkenbane.com/image/55462.jpg

http://www.darkenbane.com/image/55461.jpg

Not very flashy=(

[dadamafia]

hmm. nice but you need to show them somewhat finished. its hard for me to comment on them as they are. well i will try. the bottom part of the first drawings seems good but when you go upward everything seems distorted. the hand looks wierd and the upper body seems slightly long. i see the rendering skills are there but u need to work out the proportional aspect of the drawing first, at least make it close enough. In the next one i like the tones but the shoulder seems a bit long, or maybe thats my drowsy eyes. just work on building up the value more. the third is ok but again its kinda hard to comment. I am by no means a professional, as can be seen in my sketchbook, so i may be wrong. you tell me. as far as i see these have potential. keep posting because i would like to see ur work.

[Moonsabie]

yar i agree with those errors in porportion the shoulder i kinda forced it and the top one i was trying to finish up fast the arm is all mest up =P i do need more work compard to thouse here

[critchelow]

Your lines get fuzzy and you need more line variety. Plus mixing the red and black just muddies everything. I like the first one though.

[Moonsabie]

here some more mabie these are better

http://www.darkenbane.com/image/55662.jpg


http://www.darkenbane.com/image/55661.jpg

http://www.darkenbane.com/image/55659.jpg


http://www.darkenbane.com/image/55663.jpg


http://www.darkenbane.com/image/55660.jpg


http://www.darkenbane.com/image/55657.jpg


http://www.darkenbane.com/image/55664.jpg


http://www.darkenbane.com/image/55658.jpg

[-j-]

I really enjoy the energy and composition. Good stuff.

[dadamafia]

i like that first one. i agree the composition is good. lets soo some more.