help

[seb]

these are due on wednesday. i am about 50% finished with each of these. this is the same assignment that ari is doing paintings for. please tell me if anything is really wacky is going on.

i despise painting.

http://www.studio222.net/mike-yamada/dump/marsstmichele04a_02_23_03.jpg
http://www.studio222.net/mike-yamada/dump/train03_02_22_03.jpg
[that little dot was the brush. oops]
http://www.studio222.net/mike-yamada/dump/overlord02_02_22_03.jpg

[Lung_bug]

first two are great. the clouds in the first one are amazing. the third one isn't as good. it's quite unfinished tho... not much to crit on here, seb. first two intentionally have similar compositions?

[Deth Jester]

I gotta agree with T.

THe first two are looking good, similar in composition...I think the 2nd is still a far away from completion, try and tell more of a story in it, engage the veiwer... I wish I could give you crits, but everything technical that I know you have done well.. The last one is just isn't done enough for crits, unless you are looking for ideas... if so let us know.

[stephen]

here seb, dunno just tryin lil somethin,

http://www.seriks.com/overlord03_02_22_03wingsblur.jpg

[tyboogie]

you despise painting? how sad---and youre so good at it too.