New Cave Monster Comic

[Cave Monster]

New comic finished, let me know what you think. Please, pick it apart.

http://www.cavemonster.4t.com/images/boatca.jpg

[one2hit]

Oscar the grouch is not supposed to wander around outside his trash can.

[kinokuniya]

I like the design and style. Theres a really nice pace to the panels and layout you have a good sense of story telling. Can't wait for the next page.

[Cave Monster]

Thanks for the feedback! I'm a bit worried about a couple things in this page. First, I feel like the "thinking about building a boat" bubble isn't connecting to the page, but I don't want to do a traditional thought bubble. Also, I'm not sure if the bottom row is under rendered next to the other panels.

To read the backstory, please click the link in my signature :^^:

[waronmars]

it's the bastard child of kermit and oscar!

[Alberaan]

Like it very much. Looks funny xD