Passive (lookin for crits)

[mecod]

Well Im pretty sure that the anatomy is gonna be skank on these but i want to know anything techniqually wrong with these and what to work on to fix it up


http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v661/Mecod/IMG_2236.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v661/Mecod/IMG_2244.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v661/Mecod/IMG_2233.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v661/Mecod/IMG_2213.jpg

[Shaun Whoriskey]

your work would be alot stronger if you used a heavier pencil like say a 2b, looks like you are mostly using a 2h/HB , a heavier lead will give bolder shadows and give more shape to your drawings, also try to avoid doing heavy out lines, it makes drawings look cartoonish, but keep at it and u should be fine
( perfect circle - cool band but try to avoid copying from images alot, drawing things from life will seriously improve ur skills over time)