Military mech male lead

[feeblepenguin]

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v58/feeblepenguin/mechmalelead_small.jpg


Hi everyone,
this is a concept sketch for the male lead character for a unreal mod level my class is working on.

let me know what you think
as always dont hesitate to bash me as long as its constructive

Ali
Feeblepenguin@hotmail.com
http://photobucket.com/albums/v58/feeblepenguin/

[GraphicMaster]

The pose the figure on the right is in, looks feminine.
The anatomy is off with the size of the face you can see inside the helmet. The legs in particular look to thick, and compared to the face the whole figure is too large.
That’s it from me. :rendered:

[Kian]

yeah, liking the concept. Will a colour version be avaliable? (And with a big gun, unreal style?) :)

[spyronex]

looking good, im not sure about the tube attached to the helmet though, since this is a male lead character, external attachments especially like these are a sign of weakness. I would say try removing the tube, keep the helmet and jetpack, and try adding some more durable, plated armor on the legs/chest/etc. (im visualizing the unreal 2 style armor, although im not sure if thats what youre going for) Its looking good though, nice work man :)