evil deer

[kcotie]

this is a creature that i am using for a school project cald weslandia.i posted this to get feedback from you guys.

kcotie
http://www.mcotie.com/newimages/deer.jpg

[Fozzybar]

Hi, kcotie! Our "old" master is back :p

Nice to see your work again...

The eyes of the deer are positioned too high...you should lower them...the teeth look odd, but i don't know what it is..

Wow! How can you draw this head nearly 3d at this age??? It must be daddy's gene cocktail and some more...I don't know what killer images you'll do in 10 years...er..."k" in your nick is not for "killer"?...:p

[Nog]

This is great, Kcotie; you are one talented dude. I'm trying hard to think of some sort of crit for you, but all I can come up with is your shading / coloring is inconsistant. Maybe slightly less smudging and more detail in the neck and body area. It seems a bit too sketchy in the face area, as well. I also think you should add a small hamster trying to claw it's way out from between it's jaws, but that's just me. ;) Bwahahaha.

Soopa Nog

[gekitsu]

hey mr cotie junior,

good progress you make!
as for crits, you could try sticking to a more obvious light source and model the form out with light and shadow.

heck, you have a good teacher near you, he sure can tell you what all this is about.

[MindCandyMan]

Son of my friend Mitch... you are truly awesome!!!!!! Keep practicing man...you are gonna be a fantastic artist. I never knew a 10 year old could really grasp fully the concept of perspective. Great work man. How old are you again...10 right?