first post - some kind of monster

[dark_ikkeuh]

hello
this is my first post but i've looked a year on this forum
could you please give me some crits
greetzz

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v212/zyrax/afbeelding2.jpg

[dark_ikkeuh]

nobody has anything to say? :yawn:

[Trevor Harveaux]

I just made my first post on Friday, only one reply so far, so dont feel bad.

I like the overall idea behind the drawing but a few things need work.

It seems flat, the arms all seem to be sticking straight out, which makes it hard to figure out how they relate to each other.

The sholders look like he is shrugging.

I'm not quite sure what is going on with the neck. I think you are trying to show that he rippped his own head off, but that seems like an odd thing to do. :) Or is the neck a mouth with long teeth? Make it more clear.

The perspective of the left foot looks wonky. and I'd bend the right foot more toward the viewer.

Add a light source, make shadows, that will help alot.

Good start though!
How are you planning on finishing it?

[dark_ikkeuh]

i tryed to make it look like he ripped the head of his body an than some teeth came out of the neck( srry for my english :S )

i know about the feets but thats one of my biggest problems but i'm working on it.

about finishing it, i'am trying to do something with photoshop but i'm just experimenting with it.

i'm just someone who loves to draw and its just for fun. i havent that much time because i have to go to school (i'm only 16 years old) but i'm working on it :confident
thx for the tips
greetz