the player

[snoopy]

k this isnt really a concept so feel free to bin it, its a guy playing, when he should really be getting his hair cut
ps 6 rendered til ruined

http://www.artbyandy.com/ano1.jpg

[snoopy]

i would appreciate some c+c on this, coz im so desperate for input i might jus pack up me pots of paint and take up a vocation in tele sales :(

[Yaseck]

OK. Wanna crits? Here we go.

1. SHIRT - looks flat to me (especialy the front part)
2. nice hand render (but the palm is too long to me)
3. the right hand is too thin (I think)
3. his eye is kinda drugged.. :) hmm.. i don't really know to tell about it...
4. hair.. yeah! should be cut! and looks little like wires (too stiff)
5. I was playing piano for 10 years in a music school (btw)
6. greets!