View Full Version : Between Winter and Light
shadowgirl
February 15th, 2003, 02:45 PM
pretty much inspired by the LACK of sunlight outside over the last few weeks -glum-
http://fallenlights.net/portfolio/digital/dancer-small.jpg
http://fallenlights.net/portfolio/closeups/dance.jpg
I'm a nut. I did those frillies with a 3pixel brush.
John P.
February 15th, 2003, 04:31 PM
I can see you've put a lot of work into this - it shows.
The woman is perhaps a bit stiff...hmm...can't find any better words for it, so it's not a good crit...:
-Both the shape and the coloring of her elbow makes it look a bit like a doll instead of human, IMO. And her facial expression is a bit hard to read, 'cause there's something a little bit distorted there. Don't know if you used reference for this or not.
Having said all that, this is a very nice painting. :)
Cool colours(both literally and...you know....cool!).
I get a bit of a fairytail feeling looking at this. :)
Chonkie
February 15th, 2003, 11:32 PM
I don't think the figure is stiff... the face expression(with no expression) fits the settings...because it's winter and it's cold.
also I love the background, it's like it is moving!
the only thing i would say is the flow and shade on the white blanket is not natural...
besides that i gave 2 thumbs up
:chug:
Yaseck
February 16th, 2003, 10:48 AM
For me the tree behind her is little bit to flat.
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