babe

[fungi]

hi all, i was looking around the net today and i found this site:

http://www.cafesale.net/bengal/gallery_color.php3

it inspired me to draw this, so please crit as much as u can.
(p.s i know the mouth is a little too low)

thnx
drag and drop sorry :(
http://www.geocities.com/misterfungi/colour.jpg

[Yaseck]

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[I.was.ink]

You were right about the head. IMO it almost borderlines anime, which is a style that I don't really like all that much. The breasts are too close together, they are also really big. Sorry for if these comments are kind of on the harsh side, but I only point them out because I want to help;)

I hope I haven't discouraged you to post more, after all we are, all trying to improve as artists right?:D

Welcome to conceptart.org, and btw that persons website is of one of our members. His name is bengal, he recenltly posted something in this section. Check it out, the guy's awesome!

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[Psychosocket]

I think that site belongs to a member at this site. I've seen those Catwoman paintings before here. He has a very nice style.

[fungi]

heh thnx for the harsh comments. i dont mind them at all man :)

more pics to add soon :)

[John P.]

bengal is a hard act to follow.

I think the breasts are OK; maybe she has had them done? We don't know. Fake breasts don't necessarily follow the usual anatomical rules, so... ;)

The eyes have a bit too bold outlines, especially her right eye(the one to the left of us).
Her mouth is on her chin. You should follow some anatomical rules there, even in a drawing style like this. If you look at bengal's drawings, they are usually pretty anatomically correct.

But you have gotten enough things right for me to see you've been inspired by bengal, so it's not that bad.

Just keep drawing, and one day, maybe you will have as unique a style as bengal has. :)

Welcome to the forum. :)

[fungi]

thnx john :) i agree with everything u said and thnx for the welcome :)