Cartoon work

[Art22mac]

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v481/Art22mac/fatguylayout.jpg http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v481/Art22mac/grandmalayout.jpg http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v481/Art22mac/centaur-layout.jpg


These are some cartoon drawings that I put together. I'm pretty weak t Drawing Cartoons but I am trying to be more versital and draw more than just creatures, and aliens.

Tell me what you guys think and what you think I should do to perfect my work. I know few of us like to do real cartoons...

Checkem out though ...I'd apprciate it.

[koroshiya001]

I like the colors; they're very plain, but they fit the art very well. The centaur's shoulders are really far back, but it still looks good.

[Noc]

I really like the characters, they remind me of somthing that would be in shining force, very cartoony and clean.

the fat guy, I have 2 problems with, his shirt makes no sense, if the front of the shirt is lifted by his stomach, unless the shirt is stretching alot the back will be lifted some too, it will add some interest to it as well.

th3/4 view of the fat guy needs some work, I dont think you will see the flab of his stomach behind his arm like you do in that drawing.

other then that, it looks good bud.